by AlexArmavont
First page was pretty good. Then I got to the second page and things moved too quickly. The wham-bam syndrome. Other than that, it was an ok story. I gave you a 3.
She is 33, and the childbearing clock is ticking. He is the kind of stud she would like to have parenting her child/children, and she becomes even more enticing for her male fans after recovering her toned body following childbirth.
This big titted slut needs breeding real quick, especially by a young stud with a 9" cock, so get to it Michael !
This is a great start to what I hope will be a multiple chapter story. Thanks!
hopefully there is more to come soon; make sure that Michael gives his aunt some facials in part 2
and hope that you will be back with the balance of this trip in the next segment. Keep writing. papagriz
I love this story line and I hope that there will more chapters! I would love to see where your imagination takes Michael and Christie next so here's hoping you write another chapter soon.
Your story has HUGE potential. I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapters. You could easily have multiple chapters. KEEP WRITING!!
Up until the condom - the condom spoiled the whole story - I suggest a re-write omitting the condom.
Let Michael go into Christie bareback - that's the only way to enjoy sex - it IS just a story after all.
Thank you.
Sarah Leather, London England.
leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk
Talk about a big disappointment that there is no more.
Very well written but it is sad to know that this was your only story here. I only wish you were still posting here as you are very talented.