All Comments on 'Supermodel Aunt Ch. 01'

by AlexArmavont

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More please

That was great I hope there's more to come LOL!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More please!

That was great! Can we have some more?!

xxlost_redemptionxxxxlost_redemptionxxalmost 13 years ago

Pretty fantastic story. I look forward to more installments!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
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First page was pretty good. Then I got to the second page and things moved too quickly. The wham-bam syndrome. Other than that, it was an ok story. I gave you a 3.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Broaden The Story Some

She is 33, and the childbearing clock is ticking. He is the kind of stud she would like to have parenting her child/children, and she becomes even more enticing for her male fans after recovering her toned body following childbirth.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

This big titted slut needs breeding real quick, especially by a young stud with a 9" cock, so get to it Michael !

CWR2014CWR2014almost 13 years ago
Good Job

Great story hope you keep it going. Thank you!

joep01joep01almost 13 years ago
Great start

This is a great start to what I hope will be a multiple chapter story. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
more

hopefully there is more to come soon; make sure that Michael gives his aunt some facials in part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
LIKED THIS PART OF YOUR STORY VERY MUCH

and hope that you will be back with the balance of this trip in the next segment. Keep writing. papagriz

Chaser56Chaser56over 12 years ago
Like to See More!

I love this story line and I hope that there will more chapters! I would love to see where your imagination takes Michael and Christie next so here's hoping you write another chapter soon.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
Poor and unconvincing plot

and writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

great story. when can we read the next part?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Keep writing.

Your story has HUGE potential. I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapters. You could easily have multiple chapters. KEEP WRITING!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nice

continue story

leathercatsuitgirlleathercatsuitgirlalmost 10 years ago
Was great....

Up until the condom - the condom spoiled the whole story - I suggest a re-write omitting the condom.

Let Michael go into Christie bareback - that's the only way to enjoy sex - it IS just a story after all.

Thank you.

Sarah Leather, London England.

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

Rapier875Rapier875almost 8 years ago
Why did you not write chapter 2 ?

Talk about a big disappointment that there is no more.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Hot as Hell

Very well written but it is sad to know that this was your only story here. I only wish you were still posting here as you are very talented.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Good story but ended too quickly!

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