by Surefoot
Surefoot,
I'd like to encourage you to continue to extend this story line. You've taken a familiar and well known world and added to it in an absorbing way with solid characters. Five stars. Thanks for your time and efforts.
Henry
I like this story so far, but would have given it a five for the comments about saying
sorry. Especially is this age of insincere apologies that often aren't even really
apologies.