All Comments on 'Surprise!'

You seem to understand that writing successful erotic literature calls for being able to portray what's going on between the ears as much as what's happening between the legs! Great story! 5 stars!

OMG girl that ended way to soon. I want more lots more of that. Keep this one going it can not end there. No Way!!! a 5 Star Story for sure.

Thnx. Loved it.

thank you for all the great feedback! It's totally appreciated <3

I usually enjoy reading several stories to get worked up enough to cum while I play with my nipples. When I do it I have such intense orgasms without ever touching my pussy. The orgasms are more intense than any others. This story was enough all on it's own even though it wasn't very long. Please write more stories, and please write them often! You have a way with words.

This is truly beautiful and amazing.... please continue...