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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

Sex happens too quickly, and is over too soon.

Needed building up to the finger, and then cock, in her ass. She told him to put his finger in. He did. What was the rush? Why no dialog about what he'd wanted/tred to do with his girlfriend. That wouldn't have happened so fast even if she'd welcomed it. More playing with the ass itself followed by looking at the ass hole, followed by tentative touching, then playing with it externally all before inserting anything. And perhaps a little sniffing and rimming.

Four stars.

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