All Comments on 'Surprise Ch. 03'

I think Andy needs to screw Sandie the last time and tell her to go away for good. Then once Sandie is gone screw his sister hard, eat her pussy and cum all over her. That should tell Alex where she stands and they can have more adventures. The possibilities are unlimited at that point. Great start to a HOT story, thank you.

Chapters 1, 2 and 3 are nice teasers. Keep going.

It wasn't great, but certainly not bad.

Hope now we will see some real action.

This was a good story but could have been so much more. Could have used flashbacks to explain how his sister wound up in bed with him giving him a BJ, their early life together. How they both developed crushes on each other. His experiences with Sandie etc.

However, still a good well written standalone story.

You stopped after chapter 3????

I know it's been 5 years, but you should still write more! :-)