All Comments on 'Surprise Chance for Love Ch. 06'

A lot steamier than the past chapters but still full of progression and challenges ahead. With the sale finalised his worries now shift what to do with the next big step in his life, a new happens with Elly. Can't wait to see how he goes about it, she already cast her spell on him and patiently waits for him to act.

5* and nothing less.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't make us wait to long. Thanks

A continuing special story...more please!

Where the rest/at least following chapters? Been reading/searching for the follow-up's, nothing. Do not usually read multiple chaptered stories, except yours got me rather interested- great story teller/storyline, but readers deserve the next couple of chapters by now. Ths.

Thks. A great story with the right amount of erotica and reality. Looking forward to more

Great story I hope you keep it up and have an ending

It's been too long since you last published anything. Please give us the ending this great story deserves.

Based on your history of unfinished stories, despite good writing, thought I'd come here first to see if this was finished. From the comments appears not to be.

Why haven't you finished this?

Beautiful story that begs to be finished.

Please.

This would be one of the best stories I’ve read on this site. But WHY stop....WHY haven’t you finished it. You could easily write another ten chapters to this story. It’s always the way, the best stories are alway the ones that lead to nowhere..( Unfinished ) . All you writers have definitely gone to the same school because most of you do it...Disappointed

...a few details seemed to have changed. I'm sure at the start of the story she had 2 brothers and later 1 brother 1 sister. I remember this because he made a point earlier to say to the best friend there wasn't a sister. Then in the same paragraph Elly will go from basically voluptuous to petite. Bit confusing. Other than that have enjoyed it so far!

This is a wonderful romance story, but it is unfinished. Many readers are waiting to see how the plot unfolds from Chapter 6 on, and since then, nothing has been written, which is a shame.

this was a great series, but this last chapter fell short of completion. Another chapter is deserved.

You wrote six chapters to an amazing story for what, NO Fucking Ending.. you better be fucking dead, that’s the only excuse I’ll accept......

Boring.

I very much enjoyed this story, but there was no ending! I hope this is in the works as it would be a shame to leave it unfinished!

Incomplete

to the mostly Anon readers crying for an ending, USE your imagination! Did he marry Elly, have kids with her, all move to "his farm", etc.?