All Comments on 'Surprise, Durprise!'

awesome one of the best ever

WOW That was a greaat story.. Thanks

an amazing story,love every minute

I love it! I especially loved that suprise ending. Beth was truely what I would have expected when having to confront the other women. I think she made her point about how a woman scorned got revenge on someone who hurt the man she loves.

Love the ending. A little long, but worth the great ending. Hope to see (read) more on Mike and Bethany. What if Mari and Carol would have shown up to the New-Year's eve bash to announce coming out, only to find Bethany in Mari's dress and making it look even better (Cat Fight!).

...you couldn't surprise me with an even better story, BOY was I wrong! This one's my all-time fav, just wish it could have been a multi-chapter. Love that Bethany!