All Comments on 'Surprise Encounter Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Belongs in anal

I don't know how it ended, but it started out with nonstop anal, and that is a complete turnoff.

Don't mislead like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
re: Belongs in anal

Actually, fetish would be a more accurate category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Just like the hole he's obsessed with

Shitty.

newjaynenewjayneover 11 years ago
Baffling

Live how you want to live. I really don't know why you've chosen to put this in loving wives - perhaps the next part will tell us - but I really can't mark it at present.

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Its wide open

the closet door, that is. Just step out whenever you're ready.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
WTF

Don't know exactly where this story belongs (fireplace came to mind, but I'm not that mean) but it sure isn't LW.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Poor.

This sucks! Please excuse the pun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loving Wives?

You are a moron. No stars No nothing, Listen Mr Bottom why dont you put this trash in Fetsih or Gay where it belongs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I'm sorry

you wrote this...

I read this...

the time is lost forever...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
GAY!!!!!

This belongs in gay, since only queers want cock, real or fake, in their asshole.

Saxon_HartSaxon_Hartover 11 years ago
I stopped three words into this.

Those three words told me this was drastically miscategorized. Gay male is it's own hub.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
really enjoyed the story cant wait for second part

just getting to the good part it seemed, nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Interesting Story Wrong Catagory

This story belongs in BDSM, or Gay Male, but not in Loving Wives. Still, I want to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yep,

This in the right category. a bit more truthful than those " I want to watch my wife get fucked" crap. Yep, those husbands just want to see dicks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
To "yep". Whoa there protest too much -

Just wanna see dick? What are you afraid of boy? Never been in the services? Never been in the locker room? Obviously you ain't shared no sweet hole with your buddies..

You're a loner, a no-friend loser, and repressed. Fucking hell - you get uptight 'bout seeing some guy's dick??

You're a closet fag and no-doubt cucked to the nines. 5* (Actually didn't read it, sorry)

49greg49gregover 10 years ago
Second time around and it's still good.

I got to this story from another author's favorites. As soon as I started it sounded familiar, and withing a few paragraphs I was remembering it very well. I kept on and sure enough Lit remembered my "five star" vote LOL. I enjoyed it a lot and don't care which category. A good story is a good story. Now I'll go re-read the rest.

Tootight1Tootight1about 8 years ago
good story

"She told me she couldn't see where it would make any difference since I would be face down across the lap for the spanking and couldn't see who was doing it or the difference in her using a strap-on vs. Jim using his natural equipment from behind where, again, I wouldn't see who it was." Exactly, there was no love, no understanding, just sex. It's just sex honey, it doesn't mean a thing. Can anyone else see anything here. How about, in the middle of making love(at least one of them) what do you want for dinner honey? or wait till I put my gum on the bed post.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

First tag is a complete no, and the rest are just piling on.

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