All Comments on 'Surprise Force'

So she gets out of the car wearing a skirt, however by the time she is in the cell he is yanking off her jeans...

Since when does petite frame mean "not thin....but not heavy" "healthy with broad hips"?????

Overall not distracting and I will wait to see where it goes. A little character development could have been added to this chapter even after we learn they are familiar with each other.

3 stars.

Anonymous, thank you for catching that, it was a blip of my own between editings.

Nitro, "Petite" can also be used to describe height. She isn't a size zero, which is what I was going for in my description. Thanks for the review :)