All Comments on 'Surprise! My Parents are Swingers'

Reality in erotic fiction. Incredible,

Erotic presence through character development

Wow!!

Great chapter. More would be great

Very good story. Would like more. Thanks for your time and imagination. 5*

I gave it a four star. The misuse of certain words weighed against it for me. Then the lack of surprise with regard to Samantha brought me to me decision.

Probably needs to stop here. Very formulated in how information flowed out.

Thanks for sharing and better luck wishes for next effort.

Amber did a wonderful job of going from overwhelming to joining mother and father. A beautiful story of uninhabited love.

I love this story. But in my opinion and maybe with other readers too, calling a mother by her name instead of "Mom" is losing its forbidden excitement. Not to mention the respect for a parent.

But the story itself is great. It would be exciting if Sam or Julie have a younger brother that could be initiated in the lifestyle in the future.

I'll be excitedly be waiting for the next chapters to come.

Loved it! Very fucking hot!! Five stars and a favorite point!

Her parents should be shot. And. Her friend isn't much of a friend. Hope she finds someone to love that's not a cheater. In your story her parents raised her to be a cum dump. Sam should have told her. And Sam's parents broke the rule when Sam was 18. There fore should be ejected. Because Sam was having sex with guys in college. During the vetting process she should be ejected too.

Maybe a bit more complex than need be but I suppose better too much than too little. As a lover of both incest and group sex I give this 5 stars and fave story. Thanks for a very fine effort. Looking forward to reading more of your work. My best to you. max052

I have to say that what ruined this story for me was all the lies. Sam was her lover even if a casual thing and her best friend. She wasn't even given the fair and open chance "to talk to someone your own age". they set her up with sam because they had already slept with her. As her parents and her best friend both should have said no to the interview. They all owed her that at the least. You don't have sex with your kids friends or lovers, without at least asking first.

i gave it 5 stars. i thought at times it was a bit laborious - for example, the conversations with each set of parents could have been reduced to only 1, but overall a clever fun sexy story. i enjoyed it. look forward to more

I hope you write more chapters to this story. One chapter per interview and then the first party at the very least. Mix in more sex with parents and Sam as well.

I loved it...5 stars....one of my favorites! Hot

Nothing is as hot as a swinging family. Hope you add more.

Great story, characterisation and development were brilliant, more please, 5* of course.

This is a fun, well written (with only minor editing needed), if a bit predictable story. It's a feel good romp through and through aka the sunny side of porn! The sex is surprisingly sparing considering the title.

The title

I do hope there will be more adventures in this family .. great character outlines

Just loved the way you told this erotic awakening!

Many of us gave your story a 5 Star rating.

We are all waiting for Chapter 2.

Hopefully Ch.2 will have interviews, first group party, inition of both girls and maybe a son who wishes to join his parents lifestyle.

I can not wait to see what surprises you can add to additional chapters ......

Hurry with Chapter 2

Does she know.

Please follow this wonderful story up with additional chapters. It has been several months since you posted “Suprise! and many of us are still waiting for the next chapter. Keep up your good story writing and thanks again for this story!

Love your writing style. This story must continue with many chapters. 5 stars and added to fav.....

Please let the story continue

They could have avoided the shock of walking into the orgy by coming clean when she was 18. I would have felt hurt and cheated and even a little humiliated to find out that my parents had been lying to me my whole life. If you're the parents and you are planning to bring your child into your lifestyle then you should be proactive and not wait.

And now, when's the next chapter in the story? They're going to let single girls in if the parents sponsor them. What about sons? Let's see how that goes.

i dont know what it is about the story but something just feels off. maybe its my own personal experience but if that many people lied to me even if for my best "interests" id never be able to trust them again.

What a great story. I hope that there is a part 2 or more to this great hot story. Lost count of how many time I re read this story and I cum every time thanks for the story .

I suggest part 2 where the 2 new members and previous daughter member are presented to the next party by their parents

Please continue with this story. Can’t wait to see how more of the interviews go!

What has happened to Inspirinious? He has not posted a story on Lit since 8/2019. Well over a year! I would love to see a Pt. 2 of Surprise!

I hope all is well and that he is just taking a long break......

Please come back soon.

DNA

Would love to read part 2 to this story

It is sad that there is not a Ch. 2 to this great story! So many comments, from readers asking for part 2, all seem to be falling on deaf ears. Very sad......

This is terrible writing! Not plot, and real dialogues, no background, and forced conversations.

Great story. One of the best ever on Lit. After 2 years it should have a follow up Ch. 2.

Has the author stopped writing?

I agree this needs a 2cf chapter. But if he hasn't posted in almost 3 years ptobky not good. Hope you are well and life is just busy.

I couldn't even finish this. Not because it wasn't good or well written, but because I felt so utterly betrayed on Amber's behalf. I was so angry at her parents for keeping this huge secret from her. I kept putting myself in her shoes, and I just wouldn't be able to ever trust my parents ever again if they kept something this big from me. They should have disclosed their lifestyle when she turned 18. 21 is waaaay too late. Now, bar her from joining until she's 21 if possible, but don't keep something this huge from her.

I wanted to cry on her behalf. I wanted to yell at the parents and basically tell them that I didn't trust them anymore and tell them that I never wanted to see them ever again. Family be damned. They chose their lifestyle over family when the kept their secret past her 18th birthday.

I'm still pissed. 🥺😂 So... Really well written, mate! You got me all kinds of riled up, but probably not in the way you expected.

Fantastic story - love your work.

GREAT STORY !!! I wish this Author was still around to give us more stories. Literotica really needs better authors. Seems to me that postings getting really poor.......

Hope Ambers father had knock up her and friend Samatha I even had sex sister first 21 she 18 knocked her up first time then our mom and my mom sister our aunt bought house four of us have 6 kids from mom sister aunt 2 eachstarted our sex group turnüd into large fuck fest only black guys aloud fucked three of them they end up being knocked by black group once done covered in their spermto this day sex orgy still going on

Great story a true sex orgy with all there loved it.

Be nice to have a continuation of this fuck fest.

Makes my last orgy of just 4 couples nothing compared to what has happened here..I need to invite more for our next orgy romp.

And for the mom to be serviced by all 18 guys and some women as well in that one night bring it on for some more I'd say..

Jacqui

Willjreedy@outlook.com

And no, she's not an adult because she's still dependent on mummy and daddy to pay for college or university tuition, to put a roof over her head or to pay for other necessities. University kids get a little money from summer jobs, but that cash usually runs out before March or April if the school year starts in September. If Amber were to declare to her parents that she's coming out as exclusively homosexual and wants to espouse Samantha, her parents could (and likely would) withdraw funding, forcing her to drop out of university. This has nothing to do with whether she's eighteen or twenty-one, she's still a dependent child whose family no longer has any obligation to keep her. That's a precarious and ugly position. I do not envy her in any way, shape or form.

@tjreader: "I couldn't even finish this. Not because it wasn't good or well written, but because I felt so utterly betrayed on Amber's behalf. I was so angry at her parents for keeping this huge secret from her."

It's worse than that. This is a lot who have been throwing her out of her own home periodically for the last twenty-one years to use the building as basically a common bawdy house, and all of them have been either lying to her or at least very carefully withholding the truth. And now they expect this twenty-one year old child to be their disposable fuck toy, a prostitute who will work for free instead of charging hundreds of dollars an hour like any other sex worker. And why would she want to do this? She wouldn't. The average single female would want nothing to do with this, especially if it means providing sexual favours to married men old enough to be her ancestors. That's gross and disgusting. She knows instinctively that, if the birth control Pill is 95% effective, that means a 5% chance of being stuck with an unwanted little bastard to raise by the end of the year... and don't even get me started about the ongoing attacks against Roe vs. Wade or whatever other few rights used to exist. She might have no idea who did this to her, short of DNA testing them all, and whomever this is isn't available for a relationship because they're already married to someone else.

And no, she's not an adult because she's still dependent on mummy and daddy to pay for college or university tuition, to put a roof over her head or to pay for other necessities. University kids get a little money from summer jobs, but that cash usually runs out before March or April if the school year starts in September. If Amber were to declare to her parents that she's coming out as exclusively homosexual and wants to espouse Samantha, her parents could (and likely would) withdraw funding, forcing her to drop out of university. This has nothing to do with whether she's eighteen or twenty-one, she's still a dependent child whose family no longer has any obligation to keep her. That's a precarious and ugly position. I do not envy her in any way, shape or form.

@tjreader: "I couldn't even finish this. Not because it wasn't good or well written, but because I felt so utterly betrayed on Amber's behalf. I was so angry at her parents for keeping this huge secret from her."

It's worse than that. This is a lot who have been throwing her out of her own home periodically for the last twenty-one years to use the building as basically a common bawdy house, and all of them have been either lying to her or at least very carefully withholding the truth. And now they expect this twenty-one year old child to be their disposable fuck toy, a prostitute who will work for free instead of charging hundreds of dollars an hour like any other sex worker. And why would she want to do this? She wouldn't. The average single female would want nothing to do with this, especially if it means providing sexual favours to married men old enough to be her ancestors. That's gross and disgusting. She knows instinctively that, if the birth control Pill is 95% effective, that means a 5% chance of being stuck with an unwanted little bastard to raise by the end of the year... and don't even get me started about the ongoing attacks against Roe vs. Wade or whatever other few rights used to exist. She might have no idea who did this to her, short of DNA testing them all, and whomever this is isn't available for a relationship because they're already married to someone else.

Wonderful story !! One of the best very posted on Literotica. I hope there is a chapter 2. Five stars from me.

Some Anonymous comments are ridiculous, MATE !

Would you care to explain why everything but the last paragraph of my comment just disappeared into thin air?

re: "Would you care to explain why everything but the last paragraph of my comment just disappeared into thin air?"

I honestly do not know. I do not have the ability to edit comments posted to my stories. I do have an option to completely delete the entire comment, but I have only used that option one time in one story, in all my years here.

If you have a partial comment posted, it is a technical problem to be addressed by the Literotica admins.

This mind blowing piece must be continued.

Fabulous storey, I so enjoyed it, especially well written, I do hope there is at least another chapter.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Absolutely brilliant story. Well written and so horny

Regarding single males. I wonder would that also include their sons also. It would be very hypocritical to allow everyone including daughters, and not their sons!

Brilliant! Must be continued telling what Amber did at her first party and with how many. There was no mention of anal, maybe she tries that for the first time. Keep writing.

""if not already..you will cum to love this"" best erotic line!! made me tingle all over!!

What has happened to this author ??

I really enjoyed this story, I hope there is more of it to follow. Well done and very well written.

Brilliant! Yea, brilliant, everybody fucks everybody else...just brilliant. Someone asked what happened to Inspirinious; I think he ate shit and died, brilliant!

@Anonymous 9 months ago: "Regarding single males. I wonder would that also include their sons also. It would be very hypocritical to allow everyone including daughters, and not their sons!"

Are you nuts? This lot? They're nothing if not hypocritical. These are the folks who post those little personal ads asking for a "go" at each other's wives, asking to use single bisexual females as disposable fuck toys, and then - in every damned ad, as the last three words - NO SINGLE MALES.

Most single females want nothing to do with this, so mostly the "lifestyle couples" (if we're lucky) are left to bother each other and (we hope) stay out of "singles space", "polyamory space", the LGBT community or whatever other group has had enough with endlessly hearing the same str8 married male fantasy about always having wanted to try two women at once.

If that's what they're into, fine, it has nothing to do with me - but expect that they're more likely "like-minded" and not outright "open minded". There are some ugly double standards. They'll smear single males with every stereotype imaginable - they're too aggressive, they're secretly married and cheating on a partner, they're rude, they're crude, they'll invite themselves where they're not wanted and then if they ever are invited to anything (and fat chance of that) they'll no-show without warning or explanation. The double standards around bisexuality are worse; two women are hot, two men are a "fag" HIV/AIDS risk and deserve to be harmed in some way. And yes, some are more open-minded than others, but the veneer of tolerance is very thin indeed.

These folk will be all over your single daughters. They want nothing to do with your unmarried sons.

After all, what use to anyone is a single male wife-swapper? It's a contradiction in terms, isn't it?

If they didn't act this way? For every dozen opposite-sex couples, they'd probably end up with one single female and a hundred single males. Nothing can be done about that, other than turn them away. It's hardwired; sex is something that women have and men want. Only way to not have to deal with it is to identify as not straight or bisexual but as exclusively gay... because a gay bath or sauna can pair its single males off with each other, the entire thorny issue goes away - if this is a single-sex environment. Anywhere else? Get used to double standards. There is no way away from them.

Wow !!!!! What a great story. It is sad that we may never see a Part 2 continuation. I can only imagine what Part 2 might have been ....