All Comments on 'Surprise Sleepover Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I cannot stand a story where the 'writer' pretends the reader ..

.. is/was a participant!

The reader KNOWS he/she was not there so the 'story' is totally impossible to believe!

No believability = waste of time and effort!

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