All Comments on 'Surprise Threesome'

"My beautiful wife was laying on the bed"

No! She was lying on the bed. You get it wrong every time.

"was curious about how other men where in bed." What?

Many, many more errors and a really stupid, unbelievable plot.

This is my first story to ever try and I thank you for any feed back given and any advice on how to back future stories better

Not bad, not bad at all.

Couple of grammar/spelling issues, but nothing to worry too much about, just check more with your next.

It was a fun ride in the sexy story universe where everyone is always up for a 3some or more and no STD's exist :)