All Comments on 'Surprise Visit'

the can of worms has been opened. TK U MLJ LV NV

This intriguing little short story offers a nice antidote to the recriminaton-filled hate sex between exes I've seen here and there.

There's a bunch of questions I have but I'll keep em short and sweet...

What''s up with Dan and Wife #2?

What busted Dan and Molly up before?

Have they answered the issues that did?

Can they move past all that and make it work together or just be fuck buddies around raising their kids?

it works better for them this time than last.

This could fall under romantic as well. I hope you'll revisit this one a write another chapter. It might even go to 3 chapters.

Thanks in advance.

If a couple were THIS compatible, why did they ever get divorced. It seems like a cheap plot gimmick.

A second chapter would fill out the story and fill in the plot holes.

Having learned through the error of their ways after each having a poor 2nd marriage,the feeling here is that wedding bells will eventually ring for them again.They now realize, and appreciate, that they are perfect sex partners,already share children together,and we can figure where she wants this to go by her enthusiasm/desire to have another baby with him. (He outright tells her he's in love with her!) ~ Some nifty,descriptive sex in this hopeful, feel-good story. ~ Nicely done! ~ 5+

nice idea more story less stroke. LOVE slap hapy papy #9

s there going to be A 3 chapters?

Re-coupling

Molly visits her ex ostensibly because her new husband is away and she wants adult companionship. In realisty, this is a surprise attack to get inseminated. Women can be cold and calculating in their sex - play. I think the story might have been more realistic if Molly hadn't divulged her hidden agenda.

3 stars and no analysis or comments.

Would like to know how it ends

Don’t like cheaters and she’s a cunt for cheating and wanting to get knocked up by her lover and have her husband raise it as his. A shocking betrayal

Scores 2/5, the only tale of yours to do so thus far

2/5