All Comments on 'Surprised by a Friend of the Family Ch. 02'

we need to find out the wives are going to n.y.c. to see lovers thats why they didnt take jenny so he can file for divorce and be free to take the 2 girls openly.

but the coding on page one is broken. it's one giant html link.

I reported this to the Admin. Hopefully they'll fix it.

Really enjoyed your two part story. Can see this happening. Keep writing, you are one of the better ones that I have read.