All Comments on 'Surprised by the Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Interesting

I bet many men that want a 3 some want sisters! I know I do. Identical twins. This story is an orgy made in heaven. I do hope this will have some sequels. ( I wish I had his stamina)

goducks1goducks1over 6 years ago
great first story

I hope there are more stories. great fantasy with the sisters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
"You must agree that you will not protest anything."

That can cover a lot of ground. She's already told him she's granting him a foursome, one that includes access to her sisters. What exactly would be his protest?

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From that line's inclusion it would be easy to infer she's thinking of adding beyond the foursome, such as bringing another guy into the mix, BDSM, femdom, etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story. More?

Great first story. Well written I think. Not too much but not too little. I can only imagine what's next. Hope he gets what's coming to him...in his ass!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

The amount of lying the wife did for 2 years and basically denying him on purpose.. she has alot of making up to him.

Don't involve another guy or making him into a sissy or cockold.

Greyheaded1Greyheaded1about 5 years ago
A young boy’s fantasy - Does this really work

even in a fantasy? I would prefer more character development than “my sisters and I had sex since I was 12”.

Maybe the husband is a super stud but no dialogue or action in the story leads to that conclusion. There are so many interesting story arcs with this start that seem out of lizapicka’s writing capabilities. Maybe in a few years liza will get a driver license then experience the real world and add some interesting new chapters to this saga.

3 stars generously given for good sex scenes with sexy sisters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (4.75/5 = 95%)!

:-)

loveloverloveloverabout 5 years ago
Pretty well written....

So how many times did the fellow come, with each sister more beautiful than the last? Preposterous!

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