All Comments on 'Surprises'

A most enjoyable read that would have earned five stars if I didn't find calling one's Dominant 'Daddy' a bit creepy.

A good story, well-written and thoughtful - four stars.

A very enjoyable read! I haven't read a story that impressed me so much in a very long time! It was Very sensuous from start to finish!

I am sooo thankful to read a story in this section that was not full of ugliness and humiliation. Really, really thankful. Also happy you showed the caring after.

I personally hate surprises, even small ones, as they are just about never a good thing. I am too strongly conditioned. In this situation, I think I would have been immediately throwing the 'safe sign' and maybe a roundhouse kick as soon as a leg was loose. How well was this possibility discussed? Passing mention? In depth? Yeah, my trust issues are screaming...

My personal demons aside....enjoyed it bunches and hope you post more- for the lack of a better word- happy BDSM.

5 stars! I don't use "Daddy" either, but I just replace it with Master in my head. Other than that, their relationship is a reflection of my own. Love it.

Thank you for uploading this story. I loved it. How he surprised her and how she trusted him and just the entire story in general. -stef

I enjoyed this alot!

Ever.Or I disappear forever. You'll never find me.

I followed somebody else”s favourites to your story page, I immediately decided against reading the Blackmail story because tbh they really really piss me off and I can’t enjoy them. A story branded as BDSM involving blackmail is a basic oxymoron and that never bodes well. So I thought this one would be safe for me to read,

the genre and tags checked out, it’s probably obvious where my comment is leading (?), Daddy Dom : Little is a massive trigger for me brought about because of years of childhood sexual abuse.

Intellectually I KNOW that dd:lg has no connection to incest. I apologise profoundly if my comment causes offence, it’s not intended that way. My response is a completely emotional reaction unfortunately it also makes me want to vomit and scrape my skin off.

So yeah I’m disappointed because it had the promise of being a very sexy story, damn with story tags like those it sounds awesome!

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (UK)