All Comments on 'Surrender'

best written story of the year

I belive that says it all!!!!

From one Literotica writer to another - wish I had written that, wish I'd been there, wish I'd been you! My boyfriend will get this as a not-so-gentle suggestion.

you drive me crazy...far more than any overpainted, underdressed woman. someone as beautiful but understated like you who looks like you would never say "fuck"let alone do it and love it..you are so alluring. how i would love to tie you up, fuck your mouth and pour my cum down your throat. then masturbate you and drink you luscious cum. then untie you and fuck your writhing bodyuntil we both explode, then switch and lick and suck each other dry. i think this because your writing tells me you would love that and much more.

thats an awesome story, sounds just like me and boyfriend.. its a good read!

nice job!