All Comments on 'Surrender'

Do you have ANY original or interesting ideas ED? You've written this same story a number of times. This wasn't any better than the rest of the garbage. I've finally come to the conclusion that you write this crap just to piss people off.

At least something good came out of this

This is the singularly worst piece of shit I have ever seen on this site.

No erotic, Not in any way believable. So badly written the author must be a mental midget. Ask for a refund from the elementary school that you flunked out of.

This would've been much better had the MC been able to stay with her roommate, that's usually how these types of stories work, don't worry about what others say it's just peoples opinions. Try to think of a good plot outline and start with that. Better luck next time.