All Comments on 'Surrounded Ch. 02'

You're getting better with each story! Great to see more character development amidst all the hot sex.

You know, you're becoming almost a brand - I mean that in a good way :)

Keep writing!

I mean, look...this isn't a Washington Post column, or novel writing that you're looking to get on a "best seller's" list. It's Literotica. But if you're gonna do it, you should do it well, and you do. You picked a theme that does not get explored by many authors, and it's an incredibly taboo, yet wickedly hot theme. You have managed to also find many angles with it, and keep it fresh, which is huge. I would love to see new stories every day, but I recognize that quality stories take time. Thanks again, and don't disappear like a lot of these other good authors.

Please hurry and write more to this story its just that good

I always enjoy your stories. This one was particularly good. I do like the idea of you exploring other characters/scenarios as well. Thank you for all your contributions. And thank you for encouraging other writers to write on the same theme as well. You've been a huge addition to this site in multiple ways.

This was the best you have written thus far. Please shorten to 3 pages; but keep writing.

Loved this one!

Please have Katie also wear Amanda's cloths so that it is a prelude to the direct comparison between Michelle and Katie that will hopefully happen in a future chapter.

Please keep it going!! Great Stuff!

This was so absolutely hot and scandalous! Keep more of these coming! Michelle was already the maid of honor in this one, but a story where there is a slutty maid of honor (preferably wife's best friend) that gets fucked either right before or right after the wedding would be the ultimate taboo. Don't change a thing! Same dirty talk, same nasty sex!

will the mother get involved? is the sister pregnant?

The best story ever. Let's get cracking on the sequel. Either the sister in law Katie or Michelle. this wasthe hottest.

For Christ's sake, :O: where are you, TalkMan?! Are you alright? Do get back finally, please!!!

This surely calls for a threesome!!! Matt drowning with massive t & a!! love your stories!! You've become my addictive natural sleep drug giving me multiple mind-blowing orgasms and knock out sleep! Keep it up!

i want him to rip his ex wife's clothes off Michelle how sexy

Wife's mother should be next...maybe a threesome with the sister.

I couldn't stop reading. That was a truly compelling, erotic experience from beginning to end. My Hubby needs to get home FAST!!!

I love all these big-titted sluts who are so straight-forward and honest. Every man wants a whore and an angel in his life

Better and better is true. This needs an Aisha mini event and a knowing mother later on. Best part is that you keep wife in the dark, continue doing that.

Hope you will make Kate and Michelle confrontation memorable.

with the comment below. Keep in the dark, Aisha and deeper friendship|banter between characters.

It's as if God took the soul out of the most covetous female praying mantis ever & transplanted it into an avid slut. I half expect the narrator's head to be torn off at next liason's conclusion. Droll self-effacing and flagellation as a turn on. This is special.

Another 1.

I think the dude is the nonconsent one but they fucxked him up enough by doing this shit he'll never be happy or okay again after what he's done

Surely, Katie cannot expect Matt to be faithful to her, his mistress/slut, after she lured him down the path. I would actually be surprised if he stopped with Katie and Michelle. Maybe Mom. Maybe a run in with Aisha.