All Comments on 'Survival of the Fittest'

by Blissbound_66

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GingerVyeGingerVyeover 11 years ago
I love it!

Very original, you write well, I felt I was there with her.

Does she have two years in which to get pregnant, or do they expect her to get pregnant with just one coupling?

I would like to see some dialog between her and the soldier, that could be very interesting, they could become allies.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 11 years ago
Very nice indeed

I really enjoyed this story and I hope there will be more - lots more - of it. Thank you for posting this gem for us - five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very good start

This story is good and ends well, but it could also be the beginning of a novel or a series of stories. I hope you keep writing. Five stars

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
AN OLDE TYME FOSTER HOME

the age is still the same....TK U MLJ LV NV

EpixrysonEpixrysonabout 11 years ago
Thank you for your amazing story

Hope you will write more..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
more?

are you planning on writing another chapter?

FrivolousFrivolousover 5 years ago

Great story. Very visceral. I heartily approve. Thank you very much for writing and sharing it.

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