All Comments on 'Surviving the Rich-Sunshine and Sir Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good start

The two chapters are written well, but they are too short. Remember we are here to read erotica and neither of these have any of that. Good plot so far except for that...

dreamer3366dreamer3366about 7 years ago

I love the slow approach since we already know something is going to happen between these two.

nthusiasticnthusiasticalmost 5 years ago
Way Too Short!

Please tell me they aren't all going to be this short. The chapter takes longer to load than it does to read.

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9/29/19 I've been in and out of the hospital recently. Its been tough. I'm trying to get well, and back to writing. Computer screens are nauseating so I've gone old school and am writing on notepads. Hope everyone is doing well, and I promise I haven't forgotten my characters ...