by LucindaPaige
This is incredibly erotic. Please keep writing this series!
Just what I was looking for an erotic story with more than just sex scenes.
In a previous chapter, you emphasized her strong distaste for sunshine as a nickname, yet haven't had Rae say anything. When he instructed her not to call him "Mr Laird", that would have been the perfect time to address her own preference. As a person with a similar nickname trigger, its use automatically triggers the request to please refrain from using it. It seems out of character, both for him to incessantly repeat it, and for her to ignore it, given her unfavorable bias.
I took the continuing use of "sunshine" past her stated dislike of it as the author demonstrating to us how she was discovering more of her submissive side.
She asked him in the previous chapter why he called her sunshine and the answer he gave amazed her. You might want to re-read the last chapter.
He's such a dick it's hard to see her give in I must say. Well written though, it may be just that I don't like dicks