All Comments on 'Survivor: Military Edition'

Great plot, but one problem. You say Tes did 20 yr in Army, but she is only 33, which means she enlisted when she was 13. I don't think so.

You know I realized that like 2 days after I submitted the story that the time and the age didn't match up. I was going to change it, but after 24 hours and no one noticed I figured I got away clear ... buuuuut lol never mind now. I'm thinking I won't change it and put it up to she lied about her age that she is now... you know how us girls like to do. :D

...that Her Majesty has not posted an update for this story.

As for the age conundrum. This is Literotica where adults (especially in Loving Wives) behave and talk like twelve year old's.

Teenagers are all geniuses becoming instant billionaires and prolific sex deities beyond human capacity.

And a thirteen year old super human Marine is unbelievable?

La_Reina, I hope you are still writing. If you have any ebooks published please let us know where to find them.

Thank you - fanfare -

Okay, I am obsessed with Survivor, and this caught my eye as I was looking through military stories. Awesome story! I've been thinking of applying.