All Comments on 'Susan'

A wonderful story that deserves at least three panels.

Nicely paced, and no coercion by any. Please give us more.

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This was the most erotic story I've read today; I couldn't stop rubbing myself.

Very gentle and very erotic, loved it.

It is disturbing how the people who make the most negative comments do it anonymously. This was a good story. If you want to disagree please don't hide behind an anonymous identity. What cowards.

Really enjoyable read please add at least another chapter.

There were some fine moments of basic, decent humanity here. It was those small details and bits of empathy between the characters that made this feel very real. Thumbs up.

Well done...great end!!!!

Bring them back for another chapter or three...

Great story. Thoroughly entertaining and well written