All Comments on 'Susan & Edward-Go to Greece Ch. 02'

What I really like about your story (besides the fantastic writing!) is the focused intimacy that Ed and Susan share for one another where they are able to connect in such a way where the background fades out. It is extremely hot when the moment is just about two people regardless of where you are and shows that romance can keep the spark alive in couples as they age!

Walkings good, butt not if your swinging your bat.

Pretty sure I've read it before.

I've seen this on nude beaches so entirely believable. I agree with another commentor about keeping the fire between them.

Great detail on the emotions and feelings of being on a nude beach. Susan is even sexier!

Its nice in this couple how they maintain the sexual heat and mutual attraction

Something so difficult with the woman you are every day .Always end up looking at others even they are not as hot as mine like neighbors grass always look greener

Transform Wife to Perfect Hot Wife .

Beautiful!

All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.

The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.

Women must understand nearly all woman 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed and are enjoying.

It is perfectly fine.

Only nobody talks about it openly.