All Comments on 'Susan, the Cabin Screw'

Please continue to write; you have talent! (From a twice-published author)

Cliff

As a 36 yo flight atteendant, I loved the story. Some of your specifics are a little off but the idea of flight deck crew and cabin crew often getting to intimately know each other and becoming longterm friends is spot on. The way you made it clear that Susan understood her attractiveness and desirability without having her seem arrogant or haughty was well done. I also liked the way you portrayed the awe and submissiveness Susan felt for the Captain on her first flight; and how that had evolved into a sexual equality years later. I too, have my favorite pilots and co-pilots with whom sex is both casual yet intense. A very well written story.

Terriffic fun read. I lked it.