All Comments on 'Susan's Suntan'

by MarcoTambo

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honybipolahonybipolaover 6 years ago
any more ideas

since you could really write ... post those hot stories and get us to read some more

horny2doithorny2doitover 6 years ago

A nice story about brother and sister who through a so-called harmless " help me " situation became a hotter sexy situation. Both of them realizing that; decided to go all the way. I am sure his hot sister Susan who had already experienced hot sex; is now really glad they took that big step of letting her brother do her from behind. Cannot wait until the next sex situation pops up ! Thanks. Yes, we need more.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 6 years ago
Not to bad !!!

I'am a mother/son reader, but this one was better then most. But I still think MOTHER/SON is the best......thanks for the read

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Just a Big Pick

No not the story the writer living this story unfinished

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good

Actually Susan lost her virginity two weeks prior to this when I fucked her in the hardware department at K Mart.

This story, though nicely written, causes one to question if eating broccoli is really ethical. That is, given the current global economic fragility. I'm just sayin'.........

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thanks

Thank you to those people who commented on my story. I'm very new to this game so will try to address some of your suggestions.

MarcoTambo

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
AWESOME short story

Most twins share information.

Surprised she had not shared their dating.

Can't wait for the next chapter

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