All Comments on 'Susie Sleuth Ch. 01'

but sexy. I liked it.

Very fun story! Hope there is more of Susie Sleuth

I can see myself getting hooked on this! More please!

Nice scenes. Love the characters. A sorta hardboiled sleuth. More, please

hurry get the next chapter up.

Loved the story and the characters, Cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Loved your story! Fun. Well paced, believable in that “suspended disbelief” way necessary for reading and enjoying a genre story...whatever the genre.

But, while I can see owning a trench coat in Las Vegas, and using it for a robe in a pinch, the only reason to have the character don it the next day — with a fedora — the next morning to be outside at 11:00, presumably through high noon 100+ degree heat, was to keep the detective story cliche’. Not believable in an otherwise engaging story. However, one drop in, “..the next morning was like a monsoon in the desert...” or something similar and problem solved. You get to keep both the cliche and the illusion.

Don’t distress. I once had a character micro-wave sometiong in 1976. Look it up.