by yowser
to see why people insult your work it has to be that your either retarded or still living in your mom's basement which ever is true they should under stand it is not your fault.
Excellent short story filled with both love and lust. My wife insists on getting randy when we are hiking, and I am happy to accommodate her. Keep writing. Top score.
Too many words to describe very little action, and no feelings, but the basis of a good storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️