by 214Chance
Typos are pretty irritating - just read it once over and you'll pick up on most of them.
...but could not. Too many typos. More than one sentence was nonsensical due to typos. But having said that I enjoyed the story, keep going.
Not just the anons. The story has great promise, you need to proof read it. So many incorrect words and typing mistakes. Learn usage of lie and lay.