All Comments on 'Suzie's Lessons Ch. 05'

Thank You! I've waited all week for this chapter. you did not disapoint me. Hope I don't have to wait for 7 LONGGGGG days for the next chapter.

The lack of editing has been evident throughout this story, and the use of the word "twat" I find a bit demeaning. Great storyline though. You make excellent use of plot and character development. Keep it up!

I love this story and everything about it. One small comment about a mistake I see a lot on literotica.

It seems that a high percentage of writers write about the hymen being inside an inch or two. A simple google of images shows that it is NOT inside but at the entrance like an entrance should be. It doesn't detract from the story at all but just felt compelled to point out this very common misconception about the hymen's location.

I gave it 5 stars, but the oral sex has become a bit tedious due to being repeated so many times, although the last time had the variety of the complete deepthroat.

He plot needs to progress faster

Paul in Oklahoma

Excellent writing is characteristic once more in this chapter of this story. Character development is well done, and the romantic element advances the plot very well while never becoming tedious for a moment. Five stars.