All Comments on 'Swallowtail Ch. 07'

I honestly cannot think of any other way to give this story the praise it deserves, so I shall have to content myself, and, I hope, you too, ktmccoll, with saying yet another big, 'Thank you, five stars and more please'!

Very well done.

Fascinating study in the development of....something. Relationship doesn't seem appropriate. It is sparsely told, yet that works well for the story. What is not said or done is as formative as what is. There is no way to anticipate where it is going. Even the inclusion of the other guy raises questions. If he is a warning, what is he warning about? What a web you are weaving...

Not simple. Ennui and ambivalence. Complicated. I honestly don't know whose journey to submission this is. I'm guessing his, but there could be a twist to these twisters. Well done.