All Comments on 'Swat on a Hot Teen Youth Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Not BDSM

The story is interesting and keeps me reading, but this is not BDSM. There is no safe, sane or CONSENSUAL going on in this story. I sincerely think it should be reposted in the Nonconsent/Reluctance category. There is no way Ashley is consenting in this story line, however interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very Erotic and Well Written

Who cares which category it is posted in? Love your story and just wanted to

encourage you to keep writing, one of my favorites on this site, looking

forward to what other tales you can imagine. Very well written and enjoyable read.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What happened the shopping trip?

At the end of chapter 3, we were to go in a shopping trip. An English school uniform to be bought.. And shoes - and big trouble for flashing the salesman. A nice short cheongsam for a special occasion. Underwear to be approved through the shop window since a gentleman can't enter a lingerie store.

Get back here and write chapter 3A for us at once!

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