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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
This is shit

I cannot believe this shit is called erotic "literature". Why do such crap get published here?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
IN SWATI, YOU HAVE CREATED A FEMALE CHARACTER WITH A LOT OF POTENTIAL BUT IN THIS CHAPTER YOU ARE UNDERUSING IT

Give Swati the wings! You should be true to your pen name, indian_slut!

I liked Ch 1 very much.

Do not forget: Swati is a keeper. Use her character's potential.

If Swati worked with me i would have the hots for her & would be hitting on her!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I gave this Chapter a 4 (Swati, 5 stars; writer's craft, 3 stars; the idea behind the storyline, 4 stars)

:-)

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