All Comments on 'Sweet Ass Pt. 01'

It took 3 pages to find out this is just another willing cuckold piece of shit. Why isn't cuckold in the tags? 1* for wasting my time!

It was a good story until you made Randy out to be a girl

Randy should divorce Amy and end up with Alex before Amy leads him into the screwed up world she wants him to share.

by this conversation this marriage is doomed, time to divorce and try for something better

I agree with @gmann57...It was a good story until from nowhere the husband become a cuckold...No sign until then that he was one...He kissed another woman and she did almost everything to another man, except fucking, to make her husband pay? And then she said that she always believed in what he said? So why the need to behave like she did? Is this "The Bracelet" Part 2? It can't be because it started all wrong, and what starts wrong late or never straightens...Let's see what happens to her respect for her husband...If she loses it, then this marriage is doomed as someone said...2*

Well written BUT I have to agree with several other comments, it was better before the cuckold bullshit started and this will probably spiral into stupidity, so ol' Randy might as well plan to bail. Carol sounds like a good candidate as Alex is probably looking to stay aloof for much longer.

We will see.My guess from this author is the latter.No vote until

This was an excuse by his wife to cheat on him.

If Randy did the same thing to Alex that his wife allowed to happen, what would she have done?

First off if he's a middle distance runner he's in better shape then a yoga wimp. Love handles on someone running that much? In what universe? So that alone ruined the story. But when she left with 2 men she was basically telling her husband that she was going to get even with him for his perceived philandering. And that's exactly what she did. Was he really so stupid to believe she didn't get fucked by both those guys? This marriage is over. The trust is gone and he should have been packing his bags. And do a better job of proof reading. When she came home her name was Carol (as she slipped through the door). I thought Amy was his wife? This turned into a total trainwreck.

The story was doing great until the cuckold thing came out of left field.

Give Randy back his balls! Did Amy really do that with Eric, or was she just leading him on to push his cuckiness? If she continues I hope you have the balls to turn this into a nice BTB. Time will tell Stormy.

BDEarth

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but you have well foreshadowed the cucky path our narrator is going to go down, so I will have to exit. Not as well written as some other cuckolytes, so no sense torturing myself.

I hope you give this guy a spine.1* so far

If I see the sequal come on I wont be reading it as I dont like cuck stories and I wasn't expecting this story to go that way.

If the second chapter is as good as the first don't post it because the first chapter is shit.

Sorry you can't satisfy your wife.

I enjoyed it; Have 'been there' with my lovely wife on numerous occasions over the last 50 years!! She flourished under a three-some - which I've always thought was the best situation for any female...Two guys who - with affection - allowed her wilder sides to come out...

The Naysayers here are way too upset- possibly 'cos they've realized that they can't stand the competition... A well-written story, and IF true, then 'good on yer!'

SR.

This story started out with no hint that it would ever become erotic and I was afraid that it would end that way. I kept reading because It was well written and my intuition told me that the fire works were going to happen and boy was I right. This is the kind of story that belongs in 'Loving Wives' and I can hardly wait for Pt. 02.

this is not extramarital fun. this is fetish.

I treat g take but I would suspect that if this was real, Carol hand a hand in wifey going dancing with the 2 yoga boys. In reality, title for tat is not a good pair of dice to roll. Advice from a bitter divorcee?? Think I'd recommend leaving it.

If they make the mature decision there will be no chapter 2 so I know where my money is.

Interesting preparation for chapter 2. I do hope you will continue the story. Very realistic. Thank you. xoxoxoxo Annette

Looks like this one is heading in the wrong direction, does she want to have affairs. I d end this now . The marriage will be over. As this story continues.

I bet that guy got married by a Justice of the Peace.

Story started with a bang and started going down hill toward the end. We'll see where the authors takes it. Got a feeling I won't like it. Willing cuckoldry is not erotic in my world. 3*

That the image of her getting felt up on the dance floor gives him a stiffy for a different reason than what is implied by these characters, and those populating many other like-minded stories. His erection is a manifestation (and it is subconscience- which explains the confusion) of HIS NEED to mate with her and exert his dominance as her prime mate. It isn't the thought of her with other guys (i.e. here's your pass to go become a slut) as much as it is, YOU DON'T NEED OTHER GUYS, I'm right here!

The jealousy game is just that: a fucked up mind game. Even if there isn't another guy in the equation, mind games are very dangerous and more often than not, cause irrepairable damage to the core relationship. Some exhibitionist/voyeur tendancies CAN and DO emerge in those people that think "I'm validated in my choice for mate because she is attractive to other guys". But even in most of those folks, the REALITY of her ACTUALLY fucking those other guys is no longer a turn-on, it becomes a nightmare.

This rant is sourced from the fact that I hate the stereo-typed device of since a guy gets a hard-on, it becomes a tacit approval for outrageous behavior and disrespect. I remember getting a hard-on in english class back in high-school. NO, my teacher wasn't hot. No, I wasn't sitting near a cute girl. NO REASON. (besides being a 16yo healthy male, I guess) Dick gets hard. Dick deflates. Again. NO REASON! Moving on and back to reality, personally these days (high school was about 30 years ago), there is NO WAY my dick is getting hard without physical stimulation. I can watch full on porn with out getting a hard-on..............until I start stroking it. Anyway....

The problem of this story, and where future chapters are likely to go, is this narrative hook used about hard-ons being able to give her tacit approval to descend into adultery, along with the disrespect and humiliation that KNOWING what your cheating slut is up to, provides. It is tiresome and hacknyed, and doesn't really reflect reality. So even with the character that this author has created, in his mind, HE is the one who wants to have sex with his wife. It is bullshit for her or even him to suddenly suppose that allowing someother guy to fuck her is going to keep him "hot for her" and NOT cause problems. I'll keep reading this story in the slight hope that this author will allow for reasonable consequences to follow. Hopefully there is a lesson to be learned. But if what your are teaching is that believing in the "wisdom" of the little head overridding the KNOWLEDGE of the bigger head......then this story will suck! Anybody who thinks that thinking with their dick can't destroy a relationship, just might NOT have read enough LW stories around here! LOL!

Good luck! Thanks for your efforts.

So a finger fuck is and tit squeeze are equivalent to a kiss? And the husband is aroused by his wife's sluttish behavior? And her previous assertion that she could take care of herself was shown to be bullshit. If she and her seducer had been in a private place she would have ended up being fucked, a lot.

This is a trip I'll pass on, thanks.

I hardly think that getting fingered to orgasm and bare tit play is equivalent to a kiss, and I assume that during her play she was passionately kissed several times. Well told in that he, or many males, could get momentarily turned on by her revelations, but what about the sneers or condescending smiles that he'll get from the guy at the next yoga class? In a way, a wife getting played with in public is more disrespectful to the husband than getting fucked in private.

Will someone please talk some sense to this not-very-bright, but still mostly OK couple, before they do something irreparable?

'Friend' Carol wants to see Randy cuckolded as part of her revenge on men in general. ("I've always been on your side," my foot.) Amy wanted at least a make-out session at the dance club, and sent all the signals (dressing for a hot date, openly ditching her husband) to make sure it would happen. (It would have served her right -- and been funny, too -- if Eric and Keith had been gay, and just wanted Amy for 'cover.') Then she took advantage of Randy's natural reaction to a hot porn story and physical stimulation to set him up for what she wants next, and I think we all know what that is. Between them, they have Randy so guilt-ridden he'll accept anything. He couldn't even think of the correct answer to the 'don't you trust me?' question: 'you, yes. Them, no way.'

I admit I'm the sort who shouts "NO! Don't go in there!" at characters on the television screen. But I only do it when I really care what happens to them, sometimes despite myself. So congratulations and thanks to the author for characters that, while I don't respect them a lot, I still don't want to see them swallowed by the monster in the bedroom. Or the yoga class.

George, your comment is, once again, brilliant.

Unlike others who comment and try to re-write the story, you have accepted that it belongs to the author and he will take it where he wants it to go. Like you, I talk at the TV when I see a character walking into a disaster, but there's nothing I can do about it. I can't re-write it to have the characters do what I might want them to do.

I thought stormbreyer developed his characters and their interactions, and described the situations so well that I felt that it was a realistic story. With the commentariat for LW stories, it is the more realistic ones that get the most hostile responses.

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...Amy just put him on the cuck highway.....and helped.

Because by his forgiving before her confession, he set the precedent that she can do anything and be forgiven, but he can't.

That kind of inequity is tantamount to premeditated cuckoldry.

If he's a real man, and not some wussy boy, he'd better get stern and very clear about what he'll tolerate.

Too many women are duplicitous and willing to cheat and never tell, taking the moral high ground (hipocritically so) should hubby slip even a little.

I find the whole attitude and mindset both degrading and disgusting this episode beating a clear path to cucky hell.

Hence, 2*s.

You've set this up nicely. Please don't ruin it my making it some sort of willing cuckold or swingers story. It would be better than that if it becomes a RAAC story. Let him come to the realization of what has happened to her, and to him, after he gets over the immediate thrill of her tryst with the yoga guy. Somehow he misses a yoga class, and she doesn't come home 'til very late, or he goes out of town and he finds out that she didn't come home at all when he was gone. Then, what happened with her, and what happens between them because of those actions on her part. Not my story, but just suggesting.

Please don't make this a cuckold story. I Mean at least make it a story about them teasing and trying to get guys turned on and then leave them hanging, no where in the story did he mention that's what he wanted, for her to have sex with other men, and who wouldn't get wood if his wife legs are rapped around him, he just claiming what his his, don't go there......

I remember looking at the DVR and seeing 12:05 at one point before I dozed off. When the garage door opened and roused me it was 12:47. Carol slipped through the door quietly until she saw me on the sofa. She shut the door and walked over to me.

NO!!!!!! It was AMY that slipped in the door. Do some proof reading, doofus.

Otherwise, not to bad a story.

Once the wife left with the other two men, the marriage was over. What he did was not intentional, planned, or meant to hurt his wife. What she did was selfish, childish and evil. She planned to hurt her husband, and she planned to be unfaithful to her marriage. Oh and by the way, stop writing stories where a guy knows the husband and fucks around with his wife anyways... in real life, those assholes end-up in the hospital for a month... which is why this NEVER HAPPENS. Only in the mind of losers without a sex life.

I enjoy 'slow burners', but started to get a little impatient and wondered if it was going anywhere or just going to be a big tease, I don't understand the rants about the morality of it all. This is a fantasy and a very well-written one. I gave 5 stars..

For the read.

Well written and very believable story. Solid five.

I thought that at the very end she would would admit that the kiss w Keith was the end of the night w the guys and she made up the story about Eric after feeling hubby's hardon

Needs a warning for people, who do not get turned on by wife flirting and playing with other guys.

What the frick man. This turned into a big disappointment…

Started out weak and then got worse. Don't give up your evening street corner...

Ok. Good start.