All Comments on 'Sweet Ass Pt. 07'

Why do you keep posting this shit? You can't even write good sex, much less a good story.

Just another dreary chapter in a long dreary tale.

Please, stormbreyer don't mind the negative comments. It’s great that you're back. Hope for many more chapters. Thank you

I can understand why Amy wants to stay married to him: She has a servant, almost a slave, without will, without self-respect, for free, and he even supports her...And she even uses him as a psychological help and also slave to her slut friends that fuck around with no respect for themselves? If she loved her husband so much, and had the fantasy to see a man suck another one, why didn't she got a man that sucked her husband instead? What I can't understand is how a man submits himself to all that, and has nothing in return...Love it's a two way street...When one part sucks all the love from the other without reciprocate even a little, soon or later the love sucked will end...As I said in the previous part, this is a sad tale, not even close to the level of "The Bracelet", where the couples were even partners...1*

Thanks for coming back to the story.

This is a very good series. Please continue.

Look, if you don't like this story, fine. Of course, you're entitled to. But then just stop reading. The "gay-play" is also not my cup of tea. But there is absolutely no reason to get rude or for insulting someone else.

Many others here like this story and are thankful that the author shares his work with us.

Is there really weird sick bastards like that out there or is it all in the mind of the deranged author

About time we had a good story like this.Nobody makes you read these stories so just move on if you dont like it.

To quote, what someone earlier has already said. This is well written story. No doubt about it. I can't enjoy erotica that lacks good character development. These characters are three-dimensional and easy to identify with. Of course, not all are likeable, but that exactly makes a good story for me. That there are also assholes, like this Brad character, who you can "hate". And who finally get their share of bad Karma.

On the contrast to some others here. I'm convinced, that Amy deeply loves Randy. Maybe she acts self-centered at times, but I think she would end all things with her fuckbuddies, if Randy would ask her. And be a faithful and loving wife to him.

All characters have just the right amount of angst. Plots in this genre are generally contrived, but this story-line is not forced. It left me wanting to see what these characters get up to next. I hope the series continues.

Pathetic tale

Hilarious, you think all of this is pathetic, but you are still reading this story. Wow... the question is, if this isn't really pathetic.

I think some people simply aren't able to distinguish in their bigoted minds between fiction, liked this story here, and reality.

There are people into kinky shit and that's ok even if I might think it's weird or disgusting, I think that the crazy playing is ok if it's just a girlfriend but would never make a girl that allowed herself to be used and humiliated like a pig to become my wife. Also to allow a girl to boss me around and allow others to humiliate me especially a dick like Brad. Sexually anything goes with my wife except allowing anyone other than the two of us in our sex life. These people's marriages are in grave danger as you see how the love and close ness he has with carol the other wife while the girls fucked him. His wife pushes him where he don't like sometimes and he should get a little nasty sometimes to push her back a step once in a while. Story is fun and I don't really like cheating or a man/ woman that allows himself to be abused or humiliated but the fuck scenes are entertaining. Leave the gay shit out except for maybe Brad get a duck shoved in his mouth once for good measure

Thumbs up!!! You said it right. Everybody can have his own opinion. That's perfectly clear. But the only thing that's really pathetic, is to judge others you don't personally know.

One reader posts a valid comment. Then readers who are as sick as the author pile on the that person. This is actually a sorry sick tale.

I simply that get it, when this all is so sick, why bother reading it? And to insult people, who have a different opinion than you, well, that's really mature and shows the strength of your argumentation.

Sure, you're really a though guy. Of course, no pun intended.

I have forgotten to say the most important thing. This is fiction!!! Nothing more and nothing less. It entertains or not that’s all. It doesn't reflects what you do or what you think is an appropriate behaviour in real life.

Some always seem to confound that.

this series started strong, but has now devolved into the standard cuckie angst and humiliation theme seen so many times here. Randy has proven he is not a real man, with gay tendencies, that he rationalizes by saying he did it to please his wife. But no real man sucks a dick, for any reason.

If people dislike cuckold stories so much, then perhaps they shouldn't read them. It's not as if this were the 7th installment in this series. Oh, wait... I think, too, that perhaps these critics protest a bit too much.

We get the whole whore cuckold bull sissy thing going on. But it no longer has anything to do with husbands or wives. There are no husbands or wives left in this story, just some people who live and fuck together, constantly, like rats. Which is fine, for those who like read rat sex. It just mocks the whole Loving Wife genre, which I admit is pretty loose and lame already. But this is just another day at the zoo, watching the animals fuck. Lame, and pathetic.

Great writing as always, haven't seen you for a while and thought you might have taken a sabbatical. Your vivid description of our party was very good, I loved the girl/girl action, fisting is actually great fun when the hands belong to a concert pianist or a surgeon, not so much a football player. Just a note, Patrick likes Monte Cristo #2, says it's a significantly more compelling smoke than most cohibas. Excellent storyline and writing. Glad you're back xoxoxoxoxo Annette

When you mouse over the first star you notice it displays the message "I Hated It!". It doesn't say "I Hated It Because Of The Content!' or "I Hated It Because The Spelling Indicates A Two-Year Old Wrote It!". It just states "I HATED IT!". So until the people who run this site give us other choices in responses, I'm going to vote the way I think and feel about a story. There are writers of good cuckold stories such as Xleglover, though he seems to have disappeared, and Jaycuck, at least until the abominable, toilet-filling ending to his last story.

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To last annoy your are nothing but a little coward.

Taco Bender or something like that

Dear annoy, he's cleary less a coward than you are.

Anyway, I hope this story will continue soon. It's one of the best here on this site.

This was a good series however, I wasn't in tune with feminizing Randy. As invested as I am in this story I hope you follow it up with something that doesn't totally shit on traditional marriage. I thought Marcus's orginal assessment of marriage was right on. I find it with all the couples mentioned none had children. This so-called open lifestyle might be more suited to frat-brothers than maggiage. Amy is headed to disaster if she thinks she can continue to push the parameters with her husband ( I use the word 'husband' loosely) she is mistaken. I say this from a position of being married 42 years with the first 10 of them open before our son was born. Nothing like responsibility to make you grow up.

I enjoyed the story for the most part, a few areas I felt were over the top for me. But what is most annoying is that it is not finished! I needs to be continued or have a conclusion!!

"But seriously, in any relationship you have to tell your partner what you want, and if they can't provide it, you need to be strong enough to admit that it's not going to work, and look elsewhere."

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Obviously, the author is an Ann Rynd devotee. Granted, his version of Objectivism is a bit kinky, but the secular world view is not constrained by such petty concerns as morality, loyalty or fidelity. Therein lies much of the reason for it's ascendance.

It didn't suck but it also didn't end other than everyone's life turned out to pretty much be a Shipshow.