All Comments on 'Sweet Baby James'

by VoluptuousCara

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lavatrainlavatrainabout 9 years ago
well. that happened.

Care to elaborate? Was a good read, so far as it went. I was expecting a character named Blanche to insinuate herself.

VoluptuousCaraVoluptuousCaraabout 9 years agoAuthor
a character named Blanche, huh

you saying you saw shades of Blanche DuBois and Stanley Kowalski in here, lavatrain? If you are, I'll take it as a compliment, maybe the best compliment I've ever gotten.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
elucidate please.

Started with such promise and then ended. A picture of the situation building very nicely and then..........it happened and that was it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
battering ram

love your story - love how it ended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Short and sweet

Useless dude, horny woman with self-esteem issues. Good character development. I was expecting him to knock her up and control her life from there.

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