by VoluptuousCara
Care to elaborate? Was a good read, so far as it went. I was expecting a character named Blanche to insinuate herself.
you saying you saw shades of Blanche DuBois and Stanley Kowalski in here, lavatrain? If you are, I'll take it as a compliment, maybe the best compliment I've ever gotten.
Started with such promise and then ended. A picture of the situation building very nicely and then..........it happened and that was it.
Useless dude, horny woman with self-esteem issues. Good character development. I was expecting him to knock her up and control her life from there.