All Comments on 'Sweet Child 'O Mine Ch. 02'

by SamTaylor

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sferguson53sferguson53over 6 years ago
Love your story so far.

The banter in your fine story has me fascinated! Can't wait for the (hopefully) next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What is 'O?

You put an apostrophe before the "O" in the title: What letter have you omitted? In the word "I've", for example, "ha" have been omitted. In "o'clock", "f the" is omitted.

SamTaylorSamTaylorover 6 years agoAuthor
Reply to: What is 'O?

Quite frankly, it was supposed to be 'O'. But in my haste to submit the first story, I forgot the second '. So pardon the error. I just chose to continue with the title the way it was submitted for the first chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great potential

fun characters... like to see the relationship develop. She is intriguing

scotlytscotlytover 6 years ago
Great start

Love it so far and I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Interesting story

I look forward to seeing how you take this story

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