All Comments on 'Sweet, Hot Morning Sex'

Stories addressed to "you" are so hard to get right. Very sweet, engaging, well written all around.

I heartily agree, and was therefore hesitant to submit this. I'm not entirely happy with it, but having something, anything at all up to erase the tyranny of the blank space of no submissions will make me more likely to write something I take a little more time with in the future. I'll shift to a third person perspective next time, most likely. And you know, add a plot. :)

The timing, the descriptions, the very detailed sexual emotions--all are so often missed in stories--you've done those things nicely.

The tyranny of the blank space -- I like that description.

Akin to Hemingway's description of writing: you sit at the typewriter [keyboard or blank page or space] and bleed.

Really beautiful and intimate portrayal of a very interesting fuck...thank you very much! Would love to see some more from you.

A great first submission: A very hot treatment of a very hot fantasy as such; an accomplished use of a difficult perspective; and I very much liked the rare, but all the more well-done, play with an uncut penis. All around lovely and truly sweet!

Here's to hoping you'll submit many more stories in the future :3