All Comments on 'Sweet Procrastination'

by IanDalton

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 12 years ago
A decent piece

of writing. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Real Characters

Act like these people do.

I am totally enrolled in who they are individually and as a couple.

Great job in the short story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Any chance for a continuation? I really like these two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great pairing

would love to read another chapter of Rebecca and Scott's adventures. very interesting start.

S_FoxS_Foxover 4 years ago
Encore!

Don’t care if it’s a Ch 2 or another story. Liked your dialogue. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I thought it was too long. It's was 3 pages of sex. Not a fan of all the details and it's the same as most stories I don't like on this site. Why does everyone has to have multiple orgasm. Which is usually a good thing with woman but when I read he ate her out, then she came then she sucked him then he came. "Your still hard" My eyes rolled. I knew I was on for a long one. Don't get me wrong it wasn't all bad. Your writing for dstairs is excellent but we just don't need so much of it

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Outstanding! Please continue…

funperson969funperson9693 days ago

Great tension. definitely want more!

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