by IanDalton
Act like these people do.
I am totally enrolled in who they are individually and as a couple.
Great job in the short story.
would love to read another chapter of Rebecca and Scott's adventures. very interesting start.
Don’t care if it’s a Ch 2 or another story. Liked your dialogue. Thank you.
I thought it was too long. It's was 3 pages of sex. Not a fan of all the details and it's the same as most stories I don't like on this site. Why does everyone has to have multiple orgasm. Which is usually a good thing with woman but when I read he ate her out, then she came then she sucked him then he came. "Your still hard" My eyes rolled. I knew I was on for a long one. Don't get me wrong it wasn't all bad. Your writing for dstairs is excellent but we just don't need so much of it