by Eroscribe67
Love a good descriptive story like this... so arousing, sweet love making.
Something under bdsm where someone isn't really hurting the other person and they both enjoy their time together.
I enjoyed the Point Of View of this story. I've added it to my favorites as I'm going to be using it as a POV reference for my romances in my writing log. Thanks!
Sammies_Place
I love the way she controlled him. It was so loving of her to allow him to climax eventually
Excellent job
And just great for a 1st submission
Your writing background shows!
Very Very sexy. Nice job. Dispite the BDSM you could feel the love from both parties. If there is any truth in this little story I hope their lives will always be like this. Enjoyed it very much.