by Shadow_Incubus
Your story was good and had a lot of twists to it. I would like to see that you develop the two sisters all the more in the story. I also would like to see the story line continue.
Ur storyline was good althoug d tellin was 2 mechanical,u shud try n put more conversations btw characters n more details of d sex.
Rapist asshole in prison, finally justice. Careful when he gets out. Otherwise, wonderful story.