All Comments on 'Sweet Revenge'

by Shadow_Incubus

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Twisted

Your story was good and had a lot of twists to it. I would like to see that you develop the two sisters all the more in the story. I also would like to see the story line continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Mechanical!

Ur storyline was good althoug d tellin was 2 mechanical,u shud try n put more conversations btw characters n more details of d sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great

keep it coming want to know what happens so keep on writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love it all

Rapist asshole in prison, finally justice. Careful when he gets out. Otherwise, wonderful story.

jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Ugly

Story, bad writing and terrible grammar.

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