by kellydollbbw
I can well understand why the man finds her so attractive. Would that I could have an adventure such as this.
Totally erotic and so hot! Nothing like a beautiful BBW who is so erotic and sexual!
Great first time. I love BBW's and your twist on things is very erotic. Keep the good stories coming. :)
Are you sure this is your first submission? It does not read like one. The Romantic in me would have liked you to find her and move to the Romance category...Plus, she sounds so sexy, you simply must bring her back for more. I don't care how...just do!
The story was Perfect, damn though...wish I was Joe lol. *whistles and claps*, encore lol.
It was so refreshing to see a BBW lusted for and taken. :)
Dear Author, Being a BBW myself most of the time we dont get what is due us, we are every bit as sexy and Sexual as the trim and thin ladies. Your story was exceptional giving us BBW some overtime due, please dont stop writing about us. We make love just like the rest of ya'all. Thanks from a BBW
I really enjoyed this. I have a build similar to Sara's so I could well picture myself in the story, which I think is important. I liked the way Joe was so appreciative of Sara and her beauty, and the way he made sure to make her feel good before fucking her. Mm. Good. I'm going to read your others now, well done :)
I love how you made her sound just as sexy and delicious as any other smaller sized woman. That's what made this story so sexy for me.
I liked it. This was my first BBW story to read. The only two suggestions I have to make it even better are 1. Make it longer with a more suspensful buildup. 2. Show us more of what Sara is feeling. We needed to know what all her reactions were and what she was doing to get away from Joe. The only thing she gives us is "please stop." Wish it was longer. Very good short read. Thanks.
I wish I could meet this Joe sounds like he can show a curvy girl like myself a good time
Im a fluffy girl myself and I love the fact that Joe appreciated Sara's body!! Gotta love a man that can appreciate and handle a full figured woman! If I wasnt married I'd give em a taste lol keep up the great job!!
The amazement of the old sleazeball rapist,when his victim didn't gush on his sexual 'feat',priceless!! :)) His taking for granted that since he had a good time,she ought to be having so too...the typical rapist attitude all very precisely captured into your story!!
The big and sexy girl Sara,never ever returning to the bar where he raped her after close down time....and never again meeting the rapist,hits the nail on the head too!!...If they can help it,most rape victims find a complete change of scene,preferably permanently,most healing for their traumatised minds and bodies!!
And myself being slender and nubile,I drool and fantasize about being able to switch to being this big sexy girl once in a while!!...like your Sara!! :))
A superb first attempt!! :))