by venture2014
I hope Anya and Sam nip this in the bud. Amanda is bad news and I can see Luke being even worse. I hope they don't go down that path. The three of them are sweet together and might have a real chance at things if something or someone doesn't derail them.
Just sweet between 3 of them. This seems like orgy, not romance. Love the first 2 chapters.
I agree with the others 2 comments,keep the story between the 3,Amanda gives me a bad feeling,hopefully they will be able to dodge the orgy in amanda party
Please, please keep this story just between the three off them!! You have a good story here and to many writers think more is better and it's not. Stick with the original love story all way through. the baby is announced, Luke,Nina and Anya move to the states for college, baby is born maybe a marriage with all 3 together then happily ever after. Don't ruin it this story with what the ending hints at. Anya's feelings about Amanda should be headed. Just my 2 cents
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