All Comments on 'Sweet Young Kaylie'

Good deed!

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I understand. This was my fist writing and I may have been a little hasty in getting it submitted. I'll work on my "speeling".

Had to give it one star because your grammar and speeling are atrocious. You used "thru" instead of through and have words missing from sentences, "I go Umass" for example. I would get an editor if I were you.