All Comments on 'Sweetest Patrick'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
A very pleasant read

Whoever Noisymother is, she/he should be encouraged to write more. I like this stuff where the women get turned on by the guys doing ewach other. Makes a nice change from the lesbian fantasy of most younger males.

SadieRoseSadieRosealmost 16 years ago
This delicious fantasy just keeps on unfolding

Now how is Valerie going to keep her horny hubby from running off into the arms of the luscious boy next door? (And who is Warrens' mysterious 'girlfriend'?) I think we need to know.

Great stuff, Fi.

xx.Sadie

DaveManDaveManover 15 years ago
To taste him that way ...

Another wonderfully erotic installment of the story. While all the images are enticing, I particularly loved the moment when she tasted Toby's cum in Patrick's mouth ...

In AnticipationIn Anticipationover 15 years ago
I'd love to read more . . .

Really enjoyed this, shame it's under the gay category as the presence of the woman takes it beyond that. Just goes to show how categorisation can be unhelpful.

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