All Comments on 'Sweetheart Succubus Ch. 02'

Lets just ignore the fact that she just gave another man a blow job AND killed him

I've had worse times with a woman.

You should write more... And you could make it into a chain story.

I hope you keep this story going , it has a lot of potential.

Not a single spelling mistake speaks well for you or your editor. very nice story good progression and good intergration of sex, could be better but very few get it perfect so I don’t fault you. All in all I think you should keep writing this good story I can’t wait for more.

Fred

these chapters seem like they are growing into a nice developing story however there were 2 instances of name swapping: andrew became ryan at one point & then andrew became harry at one point - little things that did pull me out of the story a bit as i had to back track to make sure i wasnt reading incorrectly