All Comments on 'Swelling & Cresting'

A story that could fit either a loving time with partners, or the cheating wife scenario, which this is. Very nicely done descriptions and scene settings.

Your style of writing takes the reader one step deeper into the sensations your fantasy dwellers are sharing. I love that you use your cock as a visual stimulant; one that both lovers seem to enjoy looking at and lusting over?there is a flavour of voyeurism in them both.

Makes me want to. Your prose. About as erotic as a nine-day old dog turd.

Hasn't anyone ever told you that less is more?

Your writing is vulgar.

Subtle as a plane crash.