All Comments on 'Swim Season Ch. 01'

At least it wasnt boring. She is suicide prone, just trying to be caught.

BORING

Very good start. Can't wait to read the rest.

"Boy batter?" "Teenseed?" OMG, the dumbest things I've ever read! The dialog was the dopiest thing ever. Please stop!

As satire and humor, this rocked...don't think I've laughed so hard in weeks. Kep writing!

Hope you continue this series...

I am enjoying it and I hope you will continue with it.

Thanks for writing it and for sharing it with us.

That was an interesting start to a series I hope. I love the way you had the mother dominating the younger BOY. I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see what happens.

If he decides not to be a sub/slave he would need to verify if her husband is a sub, if not a divorced domme might affect her command of others.

i found the whole thing pretty irritating and lame.

All I can say is that this story pushes pretty much *all* of my buttons.... aggressive older woman, teasing, lingerie and... my god... lipstick (rarely does anyone seem to "get" lipstick's erotic power).

Write more, and write quickly, please!

Loved the story, especially all the deatils about lip color and applying the lipstick. I would love to read the second chapter, please continue.

Absolutely loved the story, one of the best of this genre in my opinion. I hope you write follow-up stories...so many different scenarios available. Hope to see you write more soon.

Loved the story, especially how she took charge. I hope you write a follow-up...you seemed to establish her character pretty well. Lots of different story ideas come to mind...the other boys on the team definitely need to be "educated". :)

r and nothing more. Im disappointed

Absolutely phenomenal story. Great build up, and I love the older woman / younger man thing. Extremely vivid, and she was so controlling, which I also love. This is about the best story I have ever read!

Damn good narration!! fantastic! please keep this story going :)

and still no Chapt. 2. What happened?

I managed to fuck two of my friends moms. And one of them had a lipstick fetish like this. I remember the first time she sucked me and left big rings around my cock. The other one introduced me to anal sex. Lots and lots of anal sex. Turns out I wasn’t the only boy she was fucking as she got caught by her husband one night with two other boys in bed with her. I was pissed because I had to find someone else willing to let me fuck their ass.

You are.mixed up with a hard ass.whore.

This guy is in way, way over his head.