All Comments on 'Swimming Pool Encounter'

Rm 202 ... here i come..:))

Very Enjoyable thx; -)

Well written

Many guys would enjoy such an encounter. It can be the best of both worlds and a life changing experience.

Well written. Sex could have been a little longer but still very enjoyable!

At the beginning I wished that he would be seduced (forced?) to a woman trans 3some. Anyway - a great story. Please keep on writing!!!!

Loved it.

I could totally relate to.just how filled in and stretched the guy felt. An added layer of challenge not to be able to vocalize an 'ahhh, fuck, you're big" and a whole lot of pleasurable groaning in that situation!

This was a great Stroker, with time and practice you will only improve. Their were a few things that could have used revision, however they were miner details and had no real impact. Thank you for the story my budding bard, and please do keep writing!

She just raped him, no hotness here.

It started so well..... Then he got raped. 1 star.

Thanks everyone their comments, have to say I am surprised by the last two as this never crossed my mind when writing the story.

I would hope that the the line "with a sly but also slightly vulnerable smile" showed it was not all one way traffic. Additionally "I'm not getting those shorts until one of us has been f**ked", hardly puts the bloke in a position of total subjugation, if it was that much of an issue he would have just walked out at the risk of two women in the changing room seeing his knob.

There was no rape what so ever in this story. It was a consensual encounter. All it had was the rush of almost being caught as she lead him to do things that he would have probably done so without the pressure.

I also highly doubt that a mere bikini top would be enough to bind a grown man's hands together.

Get over it. It's a story and a decently written one. 3/5.

i woulda eaten that fuming cock whole!

i'd come back for more. i hope the author tells us about subsequent visits

Totally disagree he got raped - if you actually read it - it's more forceful seduction than anything - he had chances to go

Quite a nice story. I really enjoyed the situation and her take charge attitude. Definitely wouldn't mind trading places with him.